Not bad for a video quality or audio quality submission, although the lack of fluidity really kind of hinders the humor a bit. Did you use Swivel?
I did use Swivel, and I thank you for the kind words and would love some feedback on how to get better at animation (I'm also a creator for ChannelFrederator as of Oct. 15, so I need to get in shape, haha.
It kind of reminds me of Hong Kong 97. That being said, the animation is ok although sometimes lazy. I also don't really have a clue what any of the dialogue is saying, but I'm gonna say it's a lot funnier this way. Just keep it random and keep the language the same, but make it more like a cartoon with more camera angles.
Eu também realmente não tenho idéia do que qualquer do diálogo está dizendo , mas eu vou dizer que é muito mais engraçado dessa forma. Basta mantê-lo aleatória e manter a língua o mesmo, mas torná-lo mais como um desenho animado com mais ângulos de câmera .
I actually rated it like a 4, but this was kind of hilarious. However, to say that it belongs on YouTube would definitely be stating the obvious. Now the last half of the video, with all the terribly animated, random bull*$%# going on? Keep that, and that would probably get you a 5.
I liked it because obviously, my name is Voltage. But I don't really get the plot, or the memes I guess. Nice drawings though.
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While it's probably something better than what I can do I disagree with the reviewer below me. I think all music has one thing in common which is that if you have the structure of a song, even just 'noise', you are at least making progress. While it's not groundbreaking I'm sure there are areas you could focus on. For instance studying on how to make the most out of your music given its simplicity is one trademark thing that many artists do to improve
I believe criticizing a piece for "not sounding right" or not sounding like something is vague.
I think if you really put your mind to it you can make mellow electronic music that doesn't even require drums. Be different; use your tools to create something really interesting even if it's bizarre
The music spectrum is not limited to being a black and white canvas, so get coloring!
(: I actually did make a song with no drums, but it's a little outdated, but maybe I can do what I did with Fruit Eating Contest where I made it echo to add some new appeal. I still think it's nice, but @cank told me I shouldn't upload older songs.
I'll notify you when I show that.
How can I not vote 5 stars on this one? Come on. Love your work as always, 364 :)
You got the joke <3
Very ill. Exactly what I love hearing. Can we remix it as well?
Hi ! Thank you for your review ! Yes, you can do what you want with this track, just send me a link to your work after that please ;)
delicious! and very good, with a name like thanatos one's company will go far. I mostly dig the shades and the tears cup.
eheheh! thanks! also, about thanatos' name? we'll see about that when i make the animation for them... B)
Interesting! Although I think one of the thought bubbles should have been 3 count, because 3 and 5 are big numbers. Always nice emphasis on repeating digits! :)
But I see that it's about someone overthinking these scenarios, even being "a thought of being in a thought." Keep at it, perhaps add a little more shading (even though it's black and white, the eye for detail helps a bit!).
You have angling down, but with some more creativity you can really spice it into something; take into account maybe shading, adding hairs and putting shading on those; adding a shine effect by mixing some whites into the mix; give it a glow? It's pretty cool, honestly; keep at it.
Thanks! I might do some modifications to the pic (I used pen to draw it.).
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